Painting pictures with
bold experimentation
Termite Castle by Asgar Hussein. Reviewed by
Ayesha Inoon
A tumult of emotions. A series of questions. Deep
reflections and probing thoughts. Asgar Hussein’s book of
poems, ‘Termite Castle’ is all these and more. Embracing
a wide range of subjects from love to war, each of the 74 poems
displays an originality of style and maturity of thought that makes
every piece a fresh experience.
The magnificent kingdom within a termite’s
castle becomes the dark abode of a cobra – ‘Lurking
in the darkness to pounce, On some unsuspecting toad’. The
secret behind the golden beauty spots of women turns out to be fungi
– the discovery of which mocks centuries of poetry dedicated
to the subject.
The memory created by a woman in a photograph
suddenly reveals itself to be just an image on a piece of paper,
‘Frozen in a moment long gone, Half the world away’.
A cyanide capsule is that which holds a despot’s dream, ‘All
the dormant rage, I hold the muted scream, And the madness of an
age’.
The words capture the imagination, taking the
reader on a journey through time, creating vivid pictures and feelings.
Bold experimentation in the arrangement of lines, language and technique,
intensifies the significance of the words. Perhaps the best example
of this is the poem ‘Bang bang’ where the lines in which
the child impudently threatens to shoot his grandfather by pointing
his finger at him are arranged in the shape of a gun. The grandfather’s
wise response – ‘How can I surrender to someone, Who
doesn’t know the difference, Between his finger and a gun?’
– is depicted in the lines that return to normal. The last
lines, where the child realises that the grandfather’s words
are more powerful than his imaginary bullets, return slightly to
the initial arrangement – indicating a newfound wisdom.Some
of the poems, such as ‘Illusion’ – and ‘Arachnophobia’
are extremely short and precise, a snapshot of a particular feeling
or thought. Others are more descriptive, sometimes telling a story
in colourful language, such as ‘Yalpanam’ or ‘A
Nephew’s Letter’.
Many poems deal with the perennial theme of war.
The warmonger is torn between his pain for a dead son and his own
call of duty. The alliteration of sounds reflects the spreading
flames and misplaced hatred in ‘Red July’ – ‘Rumours
spread in a red epidemic, And homes erupted like match-heads’.
The raw anguish of those who are both warriors and victims is strongly
expressed in ‘Phantoms of War’.
“The reader will have much to enjoy in this
volume, and we could look forward to Hussein emerging as a compelling
writer in the future,” writes Professor of English, Siromi
Fernando in the foreword to the book.
Indeed, it is a triumphant debut into the world
of poetry by a journalist turned poet – and one that is full
of promise for greater things to come.
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